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Going WordCamping at WordCamp Miami 2011

WordCamp Miami 2011

OK, so “WordCamping” might not be a real word, but it should be! If you use WordPress blogs, you may have heard about WordCamp Miami 2011. It’s a one-day conference on everything WordPress. It’s held every year, but this will be my first time attending.

I’m really looking forward to it, although I wish I could clone myself to catch all of the sessions I want to see.  Here are a few…

  • Steroid Marketing for WordPress by Dezmon Landers
  • WordPress & SEO by local SEO John Carcutt
  • Building a Community Around Your Blog by Brenden Sera-Shriar
  • Building a Business with WordPress by local web strategist Brian Breslin
  • Reaching Multi-Cultural Audiences with Your Blog by Jhonatan Castaneda

Keep on eye out for my next few blog posts as I’m sure I’ll have many blogging tips to share!

Going to WordCamp Miami? Make sure to say hi!

Do you Market Your Brand Like Lady Gaga?

Love her or hate her, you have to admit Lady Gaga knows how to get attention. Yes, the meat shoes and crazy outfits are part of it, but if you look beyond that you’ll notice some deliberate choices that also keep her in the spotlight. Some of these involve smart marketing decisions that can be used by any business.

How can you market yourself like Lady Gaga?

Besides being different (or very different, in her case), having a strong opinion and giving your fans a way to build a strong connection are just a few strategies that work. You can also leverage social media and try to get the right people behind your brand.

This great slide presentation by Jesse Desjardins spells out the rest:

Top Keyword Tricks Used by SEO Copywriters

Comma tricks by SEO copywritersGoogle can be quite finicky about punctuation. Believe it or not, that’s a good thing.

Periods aren’t recognized by Google. Neither are commas. The average person doesn’t know this and even some copywriters aren’t aware of it. But SEO copywriters who do know use it to their advantage.

This bit of information helps us avoid keyword overload. That’s when your copy repeats keywords so often it sounds silly. It’s also called keyword stuffing.

Good for Google. For readers? Not so much

If you’re optimizing your site to rank higher in search engines (what SEO is all about), using keywords in your copy is important. They tell Google what your site is about and avoid any confusion about your site’s theme or topic.

But you can’t just throw your keywords in there willy nilly. You’ll end up with something like this:

Are you looking for a western Caribbean cruise? Since 1990, we’ve offered the world’s lowest prices on western Caribbean cruises. Use our search tool to scan a list of western Caribbean cruises for discounts and last-minute markdowns.

I’m sure you can guess their keyword phrase.  To write copy that sounds natural (and less annoying), use punctuation and formatting with your keywords instead.

Think of the period as a ghost

Google ignores periods and commas, remember? Knowing this, we purposely use them to split the keyword phrase. Your readers won’t read the words as a single phrase, but Google will. Here’s an example:

Sail to Grand Cayman, Cancun and other destinations in the western Caribbean. Cruises to this region offer…

You paused at the period, right? This makes the keyword phrase less obvious to the reader, but still keeps it together for Google. Using a period and a paragraph return will also work.

Titles and subheads are your friends

Another way to write with keywords is to use them in subheads and section titles. Use them as titles for bullet lists, in subheadings or as titles for small blurbs. Readers won’t read them in the same way they read copy.

The keyword-rich bullet list

Everyone uses bullet lists. They’re almost a requirement for online blogging and copywriting. You can use them for keywords too. The key here is to make every bullet point a stand-alone sentence. This will allow you to use the keyword as the subject of the sentence. Don’t do this with every sentence though, just one or two.

  • Western Caribbean cruises are family friendly with programs and excursions for kids.
  • Relatively low prices make a Western Caribbean cruise an affordable getaway.

For SEO copywriters like me, writing with keywords is like balancing a scale. Use the keyword often and it’s good for SEO, but bad for readers. If you don’t use it often enough, it’s good for readers, not so good for SEO.

Our challenge is to use keywords in a way that sounds as natural as possible. With these tricks, we get every ounce of keyword richness we can, without sacrificing readability.

Want to know what Google sees on your website? Use the SEO Browser tool to find out.

(Photo by debaird)

Marketing Fail: What Were They Thinking?

Here’s a new concept for a back-to-school promotion–highlight beer pong as a “college essential.” Really? Target, what were you thinking?

How to Get Kick-Butt Testimonials

How often do you ask for a testimonial from a client and get something like this?

“Bob and his team at ABC Contracting were fabulous. We had a great experience and look forward to working with them again.”

Many people would be happy with this testimonial. My opinion? It doesn’t suck, but it could be better. You want better.

“ABC Contracting did a terrific job and finished on schedule, despite a few unexpected obstacles. Bob responded quickly to all of our questions and concerns and the team handled an emergency problem very smoothly.”

To a prospect who’s concerned about contractor deadlines, job performance and responsiveness, this is a much more powerful testimonial.

Your guide to testimonial awesomeness

If you don’t want a website full of generic testimonials, you’ll have to tell your clients what you want. I don’t mean telling them what to say, just guiding them in the right direction. Here’s how:

1) Decide what to highlight in testimonials

What makes your product/service better than your competitor’s? Why do clients say they choose you? Pick two or three areas you’d like to highlight in testimonials (customer service, product quality, order follow up, experience, etc.).

2) Pick clients for the areas you chose

This is easier if you sell a service, but the idea is to pick clients who can write about the areas/qualities you chose. If you’re in real estate and want to focus on how quickly you sell property, pick a good client for this. If customer service is on your list, pick a client who had a disastrous problem you solved. Make a list of these clients and their addresses or emails, because you’re going to write to them next.

3) Ask for the testimonial

Write or email the clients (or contact them through LinkedIn) using a standard message with one sentence that will be customized. Here’s a sample. Feel free to use it, just customize or fill in anything that’s underlined.

Dear Bruce,

It was nice doing business with you this past week. Now I’d like to ask you for a favor. Could you write one or two sentences describing your experience (good or bad) with our customer service?

Something short is fine. The feedback would be helpful and it might be used on our website or marketing materials.

You don’t have to use these, but here are a couple of starter phrases to get your thoughts flowing:

  • In our experience, Acme’s customer service is…
  • After buying from Acme, our experience with customer service was…

Please send it to this e-mail (or post it on LinkedIn). If you’d rather I not use your comments on any materials, let me know as well.

Thanks for taking a moment to help with this. I look forward to reading what you have to say.

(Closing)

(Replace customer service with your preferred area—product quality, technical expertise, response time, etc.)

If you don’t feel comfortable giving them a phrase as a starting point, ask for their comments then try to dig deeper with them on the phone. As they respond to your questions, make a note of anything you’d like to quote and ask them if you can use what they’ve said on your website.

Everyone’s too busy these days, so make it as easy as possible for your client to respond. An online network like LinkedIn is a good vehicle for this if the client is a member already. Otherwise a short email or letter is fine.

Good testimonials attract clients

After reading a few well-worded testimonials, prospects will feel like they know your company a little better. And if they like what they see or read, they’ll be more willing to email or pick up the phone and call.

(Image: joeltelling)